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Soulful music flows
Inspires my emotions
Bringing inner peace
- by cuttlefishCuIIer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/08/2010 |
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- Title: Haiku #2
- Artist: cuttlefishCuIIer
- Description: Yet another Haiku
- Date: 08/08/2010
- Tags: haiku
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- cuttlefishCuIIer - 10/06/2010
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a haiku doesn't have to be about nature but some are
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- 2pound - 10/06/2010
- this isn't a haiku; haiku are about nature; you have written a senryu. nice try. you get a one because the poem is quite boring and abstract. how does soulful music bring about inner peace? it should bring out sad blues, right? that's why you get a one.
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- cuttlefishCuIIer - 08/08/2010
- sad but true
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- sora wonk - 08/08/2010
- that's chill. don't hear much happiness these days biggrin
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