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As I lie in my bed and think that one day we will be wed.
As I walk down the isle in my long white gown a tear from somewhere falls,
The people in the pews are as still as dolls.
I begin to think that now my life will be based on two,
As I say the solemn words I do.
A kiss from our lips and now our hearts are bound by the thorny whips.
If immortality is what you seek then you must demolish the weak.
I may take a dagger to my heart,
But I want you to know that we will never be apart.
If you ever seem to forget,
I will remind you that your love took her life,
So your dream could be met.
-Chelsey Goldsmith
- by Give Me A Hint |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/28/2010 |
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- Title: As long as we both shall live
- Artist: Give Me A Hint
- Description: I wrote this as a response to an old boyfriends poem he wrote for me. It's no where near as good as the one he wrote but I decided to post it. Comment and rate I'm always looking for suggestions. Please nothing to harsh.
- Date: 12/28/2010
- Tags: long both shall live
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Comments (3 Comments)
- estatik - 01/09/2011
- i love it !!! you are really good
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- Kaia Black - 01/03/2011
- i really like it!! but it is hard to understand it fully when i dont know what wrote but oh well haha i really enjoyed!
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- cloudmarc - 01/01/2011
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LOVE IT <3 <3 <3
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