Dearest Memories

• Artist: Robotic Purple
• Description:
• Date: 01/27/2011
• Tags: dearest memories

oh the care free days
the black berries we stole
the sweet taste of spring air
thoughs memories i hold so dear
feeding the horses dew covered grass
watching them chew their morsells
oh thoughs dearest days
i can still recall every word
the roar of the wind
winnie of a half blind horse
the giggles and laughter of my best friend
the last thing she ever told me
she said shey never see me again
and then my heart snapped
the only thing i felt would never leave me was now gone
like a newborn fawn without her mother
i felt defenceless
oh half blind horses
dew covered grasses
our rain soaked faces
smiles from ear to ear
one selfish desision ruined it all
i guess i just wanted something i can never have...
a true friend to keep
a stable true friend
somebody to trust and keep close
to share my deepest secrets
just the thing i want most
i just cant ever keep

Comments

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this poem is very deep. I like the pacing, but I don't care for unnecessary words like 'and'. for instance, you could change, 'the black berries we stole' to 'stolen blackberries.' but you're the poet.
and if this poem is about your personal experiences, my condolences.