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As I dream
I dream of life
But also death
Birth to death
Death to birth
Are dreams real
Or are they imagination
I believe they're visions
of the past and future
Mainly the present we are in
What do you dream of
unicorns and ponies
well that sounds nice
but it's not reality
Am i dreaming?
Are you dreaming?
Dreams are what you make of them
- Title: Dreams
- Artist: Your Hobo
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Description:
Eh read it xD
Yes this is original D:<
So no stealing - Date: 04/15/2011
- Tags: dreams
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Comments (2 Comments)
- cre8ive_ovadose - 05/01/2011
- It's not too bad, but it's not super amazing either. Perhaps look into structure, grammar etc. 3/5
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- PM Notification - 04/15/2011
- I don't like the third and fourth verses. First and second are iffy. 2
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