when i walk to when there is n

• Artist: st1tch3s
• Description: look at darkness and you end up nowhere
• Date: 04/19/2011
• Tags: walk there

i can walk a long path but still cant find the end
i can see past the mountains but cant find my way home
i can talk all i want but you cant hear me
i am wondering if im even alive at all
if someone can hear me please tell me so i can be happy

Comments

[Tokenza]

I can hear you smile
Give it a little tuning and you could be onto the making of a brilliant song... atleast that's what came to my mind. good job 3/5