my rant not really art

• Artist: nicknmartin
• Description: Not a poem really, just more of a drunken rant
• Date: 04/27/2011
• Tags: rant anger love

The lies they split, the love that we made, how could you lie, why would you lie? ive givin so many chances and its easy to see that all youll ever do is repeat my history, I truely loved you, and all you did was destroy me, mentaly and physically, the dugs, the sex, and the honesty, are lies is all theyd be. I gave yo my soul and you destroyed it, ive never cried intell now, i know im a p***y, but you still haunt my dreams, i truely gave you everything, ive spent so much to keep seeing you, and i got nothing in return, so when i asked honesty what did you do? destroyed me slowly threw and threw

Comments

[forgetten-angel15]

Not to be a critic but I think you used the wrong word. rather than "threw and threw" did you mean "through and through"? Other than that it was pretty good. I liked it. ^ ^

[huntedxangel]

that sounds like something my ex would tell me... that's not a good thing is it..

[Dawn Aelita Madhatter12]

thats really sad.