respect

• Artist: gip2123
• Description: this is a free style poem that is still in progress, please comment
• Date: 04/30/2011
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i've come to respect the world. It's people and its diversities, that each person is diffrent in there own way. i've come to admire each talent and retard.

yet the world does not respect me in the ways i am not as they are, "that's dumb" or you're stupid",that my differences are not to be tolerated, but i am to tolerate.

Comments

[gip2123]

i dont use the word as a simple way to say a person with disabilities but i use the word retard as the actual meaning, disability every persons disability sounds wrong so i used the word retard to contrast the word talent... im not so underclassed as to use a word for the wrong meaning

[Raziel Moonfire]

I know this is a free style poem, but I would not use the word retard. Yes, they are many unintelligent people in this world, but there are better words to describe them. Also, so capital letters, will make your writing look neater and not sloppy.