Hearts

• Artist: Dusk The Hex Girl
• Description: This is about love. That is true.
• Date: 05/07/2011
• Tags: hearts

He gave her his heart, hoping she wouldn't break it,

He gave her his love, hoping she would love him back,

She gave him her heart, hoping he wouldn't break it,

She gave him her love, hoping he would love her back,

They loved each other the only way they knew how.

They fought and went through a lot, no longer are they dating but they still love each other to this day,

They both think that they are soul mates,

That they are meant to be together, through everything

No matter what life throws their way.

Comments

[Pure_Celestial_Snow]

i like the poem a lot. and i understand it. what i don't understand is if they still love each other why aren't they together?

[Apathetic Castiel]

why are they always giving?
why can't someone take once in a while?
1/5 poorly done

[Dusk The Hex Girl]

I am new to poetry. So Thank u so much for ur help. I Will fix it. I am happy for u help.

[Blush 4 me]

first line- Have should be gave
sixth line- threw should be through
eighth line- threw should be through (again)
Over all i found this poem poorly edited. You have potential but you needed to edit this. Poetry is not written in one sitting, you have to come back to it and edit.