Rubies

• Artist: Meeshkitty
• Description: Poem o.e and I don't feel like writing a description.. poems shouldn't need descriptions.. they should mean whatever you think they should... just because I think it means one thing doesn't necessarily mean it does...
• Date: 05/10/2011
• Tags: rubies

Bloody red rubies
Cascading to the ground
Seeping slowly from my veins
Staining everything around
Lovely crimson prisms
Sliding down my skin
Rushing to leak out
Escaping the emotions within
Warm delicious garnets
Stealing away my life
Slowly draining my energy and
Ending all my strife

Comments

[pixie_dust32891]

i know everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but it's kinda clear as to what she's speaking about... to me anyways.
I thought it was pretty darn descriptive, and a good choice in words as well. smile

[cortez_4]

well i agree with your description. but what i see in your poem is kinda blurry. well for me it has a rather odd blurry message. well for me it's fine. 3/5