The Smaller, The Prettier

• Artist: maydaymouse
• Description: It's a working title, but I just came up with this in about 5 minutes yesterday. Just memories, and feelings I was finally able to put together in a poem. The style is a bit different from how I usually write, and I think I did pretty well. I hope whoever reads it, likes it enough to give me fair ratings and comments. Thank you!
• Date: 06/22/2011
• Tags: smaller prettier size pain happy

One size smaller
One smile bigger
The pain goes away
With every pound
And every tear
I shed
If I take something in
It will come
Right
Back
Out
So it's easier if
I just have
Nothing
This will hurt
No one, but
Me
So there's absolutely no reason,
Why you should be
Crying
Especially over something
That will
Make
Me
Happy
Hell, Beauty is
Pain
And I'm
Sick
Of Being
Ugly
It doesn't hurt much
So stop your worrying
And start feeling
Happy
Like I will be
Soon

Comments

[magic_doglover]

very nice. it was simple, but flowed quite well. the sincerity of it was also apparent, whatever for that sincerity actually took.

[maydaymouse]

Thanks, that really means a lot. =)

[Arthuritis592]

I would assume this is about Bulimia in which case, good for you for being able to write about it. I could really feel the way you felt, and I believe this is a good interpretation of how that disorder feels. 5 for you