The beat of my heart and soul

• Artist: SoIrate
• Description: my heart only beats for one her name is heartbreak.
  and this is my poem so dont claim this as yours or ill have seks wif your ear while you sleep :D
• Date: 06/22/2011
• Tags: beat heart soul

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like the beat of a drum

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or a mothers song

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a melodic summers day

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or the splashing of waves

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because of you it stops

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so i die slowly

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Comments

[Rikimaru Zicre]

wow i really like that
5/5

[maydaymouse]

Change the yellow lettering, it's way too bright to be able to tell what it says. Overall though, I think it was good. 4/5.
Rate back please?