The Knife

• Artist: CaptnCuddles
• Description: Well my friends' been having a horrible life and mine has taken a turn for the worst so things came up and I tried crazy solutions, but.. It had to stop.
• Date: 08/09/2011
• Tags: knife blood deadly hand slow

The used knife
Sharpened to a point
Shining with a glint
Deadly

It could race
Through your skin
Without one stop
Blood begins

Ready to dig
Deep and wide
But it needs your hand
As its guide

It's ready
"Let's go.."
But my hand
Is just too slow......

Comments

[CaptnCuddles]

Thank you, you're critique means a lot.(:

[FayteDragon]

I've felt this before, and I definitely can empathize. This poem, though it's quite short, hits me deep. And it's not bad that it's deep, any longer and it wouldn't be the same. I love it, 5/5

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