Anger

• Artist: KingBet
• Description: This is a freestyle poem that I created in response to an idea I had. I wanted to challenge myself by writing a poem about different emotions that I've experienced, and this poem is geared towards the emotion anger. Enjoy reading the poem, and post your comments below. I love feedback so feel free to help me out with your comments.
• Date: 11/11/2011
• Tags: anger kingbet poetry poem emotions

Anger

Anger is an interesting thing.
The angry bumblebee may sting,
but an angry man can put you in a sling.

Like poison,
anger can infect everything.
Turn you black and blue
with purblind misery.

The happy hummingbird will sing.
Yet, so does the mockingbird,
but it makes you want to scream.

Angry buzzing fills your head.
The lights go dim,
and you wake up
in a hospital bed.

Why so mad?
Why not grin?
The tactile troll
can only live within.

Comments

[INFJ Demeanor]

Nifty, I'll admit it took me a second to get a rhythm, but it's rather nice. ((Feel free to rate mine as well. ^_^ ))

[Whispering Shadower]

I think this is a fantasitc poem written ,as you said, to express a common human emnotion by comparing it to a physical thing or surrounding such a the bee the mocking bird and the humming bird, very well written and a good choice to compare it to a tactile troll. I enjoyed reading it very much