Reasons

• Artist: MeganAline
• Description: A short poem about not giving up on love. Comments, edits, and constructive critisism is very much appreciated! <3
• Date: 12/30/2011
• Tags: reasons

Reasons

The memories I cherish, you forget.
The people I love, you discriminate.
The places I go, you avoid.
And the person I am, you hate.

But I'll keep trying because I want to
And I'll keep fighting because I need to
I'll die doing this because I have to.
It will all be for one reason, I love you.

Comments

[Professor_Posh]

j.j

I feel like this poem was really incredible, like something about slum life or something, and then I got hit with that last three words: I love you. Somehow, everything else doesn't click... However, on a second reading, I found the poem very moving, now that I fully understood what the real topic was. Maybe the word "discriminate" isn't the greatest with the rest of the used vocabulary. If you're shooting for more simple words, like the rest of the piece, try a synonym.

Good post.

[xXxblack3starxXx]

Great