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Henrietta's notebook.
I shall post whatever I see fit to post, whether it be snippets of wisdom, self-authored stories, or just random tidbits of pointless information.
My story, eleventh installment.
Henrietta closed the door behind her, leaving the unknown scrap of paper behind. As she expected, once the door was closed, she found herself in the hallway, without a door where she had stepped through. A shudder ran through her slender frame, and a bitter chill settled into her bones. It was as if she had just been plunged into a subzero river. She wrapped her arms around herself, trying to stay warm.
Just as soon as it happened, it stopped, and she was as warm as she normally was. She looked around, wondering just what exactly was going on. Down the hallway loomed several more doors, and after a few dozen yards the hallway itself vanished into the shadows. The carpet, the wallpaper, everything; it was all the same, utterly the same as she had seen it for what felt like months but was perhaps only hours.
She continued down the hallway, and reached the next door. She grabbed the handle, and felt a tingle run through her hand, as if there was a mild electric current running from the knob to her body. It passed, but the feeling remained in the form of a slight tremor in her hand. She opened the door, and stepped inside.
This time there was no flash of light, no wave of darkness. She could see pale shadows before she had fully entered the room, so it was no surprise what she saw when her eyes adjusted to the lower lighting.
This room looked mildly similar to the last one. The same deep red crushed velvet carpet, the same wall to wall bookcases filled with ancient tomes and the same smell of pipe tobacco. However, there were no chairs in this room. There was no globe, resplendent with precious gems and jewels, spinning lazily as a young girl ran to tug at her mother's dress...
What had happened?! Henrietta blinked, and staggered slightly, falling back against the door, which had closed itself behind her. She looked around, but knew that the young girl and the woman that she saw were not in this room. could it have been a memory? She reached deep into her subconscious, but whatever it was that had caused the slip had been repaired; she couldn't remember anything.
Sadly, she walked forward, to where she thought the globe had been. There were no impressions on the carpet, no pattern of dust evincing an object's absence. If she were to go by what she could see, then it would mean there had never been a globe here.
Listlessly, she walked throughout the room, but didn't take much notice of things. Her fingers trailed along the bookcase, rubbing against the warm, dry leather of the various books' bindings. After a moment, she was motivated by a wave of sadness to leave the room, to seperate from this gnawing hole she felt growing in her heart.
Hurriedly, she returned to the door, and gratefully slipped past it to the hallway.






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You Rule Supreme
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 02, 2006 @ 07:44pm
Starts off giving a feeling of being trapped but able to explore. Creepy how the room was so similar.


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 06, 2006 @ 08:01am
ohh memories? maybe Henrietta is going through her own mind. perhaps those floating figures got her and she retreated inside her own mind to escape. ninja just a theory. I wonder if she was the girl or the mother or neither? does the tobacco smell have something to do with it all? they say smell is the strongest sense tied to memory. surprised 3nodding This is like one big giant mystery and just trying to figure out the next twist or turn is fun and surprising. I'm really enjoying your story so far, and as always I cant wait for the next installment 3nodding cool



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Zathura
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 13, 2006 @ 05:36am
Oh! So intriguing... when is the next installment?


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