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Snow is falling everywhere
Landing flake by flake
White as a Kiki kitty
Or the frosting on a cake
The wreaths are hung on every door
There's winter in the air
Christmas should be a joyous time
A time to love and share
Of course not everyone in town
Is as merry or as pleasant
There's a man who is out on his luck
On finding his daughter a present
She says she wants a ninja headband
Or the awesome horns of the demon
The man had no gold to spend for those
On this night, so crisp and even
He watches the mighty bigwigs
Buying things in the snowy marketplace
And watching them buy things for spoiled kids
Put a deeper frown upon his face
He passes the pet stall with a sigh
And then sees something quite funny
Pressed against the glass nearby
Is a tiny green rabbit called Grunny
Its little face beams at him
And it has a cotton white tail
It's a festive green with red eyes
And for 10000 gold, it was on sale!
On Christmas morning the following day
His daughter pulls off the bow
And tears off the wrapper, opens the box
And looks at the grunny below.
It is not nearly as cute as the Kiki or Cocos
And it is drooling worse then the babies
And she is not sure or not
If it has been tested for rabies
But she picks it up gently
And holds it close against her chest
And she feels a vibrant and luxurious love
As her heart flies about in her chest.
The snow is drifting white as a yeti
And for winter it will continue to fall
But the little girl is warm with her grunny
The greatest gift of all.
- Title: The poor man and the grunny
- Artist: JellyFaun
- Description: Just trying to pep up the Christmas spirit a bit with a little story in the form of a poem. 83 Its not very good and I don't expect to win, though.
- Date: 12/12/2008
- Tags: poor grunny
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Toxic Saliva - 10/05/2009
- You get 4/5 for the poem itself, .5/5 for using grunny, and another .5/5 for good story plot. So a 5/5. Good Work! I am a picky one!
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- Berry Friend - 07/21/2009
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that was awesome. it sounds like song lyrics. =]
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