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- Title: 9 11 the poem
- Artist: Doctr Muffin
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My whole world is falling down
Nine one one, nine one one.
In smoke and debris our loved ones drown
Nine one one, we say.
Husbands, brothers, sons, and dads
Nine one one, nine one one,
Wives and sisters, daughters, moms,
All come to help that day.
Senseless deaths from hate and war,
Nine one one, nine one one,
In our homeland or yonder shore,
When will it go away?
Our children need us to be there,
Nine one, one, nine one, one,
To give them tender love and care
that drives their fears away. - Date: 09/09/2008
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Foph - 09/13/2008
- Interesting. *nods*
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- Imagine0134 - 09/13/2008
- Pretty good, but... The tail is a little out of place. I say 4.
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- Xx iced_moon_mystery21 - 09/13/2008
- nice ^_^
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- kitty725 - 09/13/2008
- I really really love it!
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- i_N3LI - 09/13/2008
- not dat good
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- Fish Custard - 09/13/2008
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woooowwwwwwww.
veerrrrrrryyyyy.........creeaaatttiiivvveeee......... - Report As Spam
- zizibona - 09/13/2008
- wow hahahaha that's great I like it a lot 10/10
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