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I have fallen so deep, so deep into love,
My hopes are steep, soaring like the doves...
Because one day, I hope it occurs...
That I'll fly to Minnesota, fly above the birds...
Fly away from my homeland, from the place of my birth,
and to a new land, new climate, new earth...
I no longer wish to be so sullen, filled with the burden of sorrow...
It is my heart which she has stolen, and hers which I have borrowed.
The only way to rid myself of this annoying pain,
is to be where no one can see me cry, to stand out in the rain...
The only one's who know of this pain,
are those who feel exactly the same...
Being so far away from life,
Away from your love, away from your wife...
My confession is that I have fallen in love,
Fallen so far, I can't see the sky above...
I wish to be filled with glee,
Holding my love, for all eternity...
And one day, my wish will come true,
I love you Erika, I hope you know I do...
I'll spend all day, from dawn till dusk...
Thinking of you, doing what I must...
Until that day, when I press my lips upon your face,
And hug you so tightly, your breath I erase...
I love you Erika, I will never stop...
and My hopes of seeing you, they will never drop.
Thank you for reading smile
- Title: Fallen
- Artist: Killvin
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Description:
This is a poem I wrote to, and about my girlfriend, Erika... It's not my first poem, but it is my favorite, and it is also my first to be entered into the Arena, please rate, comment, or ignore... I just felt like trying this out! lol
btw, 6th line... new earth, means like new soil... unfamiliar territory... just so it's not confusing anyone... - Date: 11/15/2008
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- Killvin - 11/15/2008
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- xXx_Silent_Karma_xXx - 11/15/2008
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ok this poem is so cute...it almost made me cry
this partThe only way to rid myself of this annoying pain,
is to be where no one can see me cry, to stand out in the rain...
The only one's who know of this pain,
are those who feel exactly the same...
reminded me of me a lil bit
i give this poem a total 11 out of 10 ^^ - Report As Spam