I drew you a picture...

• Artist: Okami Kiba
• Description: This was a poem i wrote for my friend (girlfriend at the time), DT... I wrote it to go along with the avi art i drew for her. Let me know what you think. And lots of love to DT!
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: drew picture

I drew you a picture... it may not be too clear.
But, look. See here... does it make sense, my dear?

Do you see what it is, do you know what it means?
He gives her his heart, he calls her his "queen".

Can you tell who she is, can you make out her face?
You've seen them before. Thought I'd say, just in case...

And she's holding him close, I don't know if you knew.
And although he likes her, he's not sure what to do.

If you know what I'm saying, then please let me know.
If you don't, I can help you... just stay here, don't go.

I drew this to show you... my expression of me.
I'm hoping you like it, and I hope you can see...

Are you seeing it clearly, is the picture clear yet...?
I don't want it to be something you'll ever forget...

I showed you that picture... the one I just drew.
Could you tell? This is me... and the queen there is you.

Comments

[NebuChi3]

I'm horrible at poetry, but poetry and songs are better than anything else.
You can express how you feel by writing or singing for someone.
I wish I had a great friend like you.
=(

[dreamweaver33]

thats so sweet! ur girlfriends is lucky.

[Kuro_42-42-564]

wow that was awesome!!! it was very touching! XD

[Yaksha-chan]

Very nice..sweet. Your gf is lucky to have you.

[Kawaii Otaku Kun]

yaaaay~! u made a new one! XD i've been waiting! ^_^ good job as always!

[95luvlafliv]

im lost 4 words it was amazing beyond comparison 5/5
real talent

[Killvin]

I enjoyed it, and I would actually like to be ur friend, I don't know many other poets-in-the-making... lol