I drew you a picture...

• Artist: Okami Kiba
• Description: This was a poem i wrote for my friend (girlfriend at the time), DT... I wrote it to go along with the avi art i drew for her. Let me know what you think. And lots of love to DT!
• Date: 11/20/2008
• Tags: drew picture

I drew you a picture... it may not be too clear.
But, look. See here... does it make sense, my dear?

Do you see what it is, do you know what it means?
He gives her his heart, he calls her his "queen".

Can you tell who she is, can you make out her face?
You've seen them before. Thought I'd say, just in case...

And she's holding him close, I don't know if you knew.
And although he likes her, he's not sure what to do.

If you know what I'm saying, then please let me know.
If you don't, I can help you... just stay here, don't go.

I drew this to show you... my expression of me.
I'm hoping you like it, and I hope you can see...

Are you seeing it clearly, is the picture clear yet...?
I don't want it to be something you'll ever forget...

I showed you that picture... the one I just drew.
Could you tell? This is me... and the queen there is you.

Comments

[i will be a hokage]

wow that was amazing!you have a talent kid 5/5

[Cuteh_Bootay_Kimi]

Incredibly well written. It has nice flow, good literature, and an intellectual insight. Very very well done.

[Ms Make Me Smile]

omg i wish a boy would write that for me,your so nice for writing that and i loved the way its was a story as well and it was amazing which is rare to find a poem thats also a story to be this good