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I walk into a flowershop
To see what I might buy.
Some roses placed upon a shelf
Soon quickly catch my eye.
Yellow, red, white, and black.
Their colors as they're shown.
All wrapped in lace, of the finest kind.
It's like a flag being flown.
As I buy this unique bouquet
The yellow begins to bloom.
I smile as I take it home
And place it in my room.
Time does pass, the first rose dies
and the second smells twice as sweet.
With unique beauty, and crimson petals,
This rose beholds a rare treat.
As the red rose still stands firm
It shares it's life with the white.
To see these two intertwined in lace
Is truly a human delight.
Wind beats down on the white rose,
Soon, it withers to die.
The black rose has now sprout it's bud.
It's unusual beauty makes me cry.
Even when the black rose fades,
A red rose remains strong.
When time has passed, it will remain
An immortal swansong.
- Title: The Bouquet
- Artist: Mr Botty
- Description: A dream I had...
- Date: 07/19/2008
- Tags: bouquet
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Comments (5 Comments)
- E d i b l e F l o w e r - 07/29/2008
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The rhymes are forced at times, have you ever tried doing freeverse? thats usually a good way to work that out of your style.
Otherwise, I thought it was lovely. The story you managed to tell was like a little peek into the human mind. If you don't mind me getting over anatytical, I'd like to... well, over analyze @_@
Yellow roses symbolize infertility or stagnant relationships. I myself associate the color yellow with two things; childishness, and disease. Red roses, obviously, symbolize love - Report As Spam
- Serah Cross - 07/19/2008
- I LOVE IT!!!!
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- trueprfashn - 07/19/2008
- ooooh thats nice!
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