Closed

• Artist: GoldenMoth
• Description: Just something I came up with, although this never happened to me, I think it will help someone that has had this happen to them. :)
• Date: 10/19/2008
• Tags: breakup lettinggo andclosedin

I feel closed up like in a small space
Just about every time I see your face.

You hurt me once but not again
I feel like running from a once loved friend.

You said goodbye and never returned
people talk about how I got burned

I trusted you and you let me down
I have no other option but to frown

I can't walk and neither run or hide
Every time I try, I get a pain inside

I don't like to be caged, in a small space or box
I have found the key and opened all the locks

What you did was such a crime
I will say goodbye this time.

Comments

[GoldenMoth]

Thanks I thought about breakups and how people would feel, and I made it into words that were a little unusual but fit really well. Also please tell your friends about my poem and rate it!! Thanks

[Chayce West]

<3 xD that's really good and a new way of looking at it