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As the rosebuds fall on this dark sullen day
And so shall my love die for you
And as the sovereign beauty of life passes away
We shall hold these words, forever shall they be true
This morose, sullen sound that echos through the ears
A last dying song of what we held through
a memory that races through all of our years
We fall with our past, in which we can never undo
We look upon this world, seconds before escape
Fighting to mend the hearts that have been slain
But when we look towards our loves, the lives that we have shaped
We realize that we shall never die in vain
And so the blissful springtime, with 1000 acres of life
Shall be struck down into the cold peaceful rain
and though This death do us part, as we dim the lights
We can only hope that love will numb the pain...
- Title: Death of a love
- Artist: mosier
- Description: Ill just leave this here.
- Date: 11/27/2008
- Tags: death love
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nano Eternity - 11/29/2008
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Wow, that is pretty darn excellent, no wonder your in the spotlight.
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- xxNeverForeverxx - 11/29/2008
- oooohhhh myy GOSH! ur amazing, wow, sniff.. i cry easily, but this really takes it... ohhh.
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- ais_18 - 11/29/2008
- i love it.... seriously.. it's awesome
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- sam soccer003 - 11/29/2008
- I luvedd it it was soo beautiful!
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- PhantomDragoness - 11/29/2008
- I luv it it is sooo touching 5/5
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- tksunshine93 - 11/29/2008
- Wow....Most people can't make me cry with what they write but you did....bravo, it's a truly beautiful poem even though it makes me think of heartbreak. 5/5
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- Smelly Toast - 11/29/2008
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:'[ -sniffle-
I love this... -wipes tear from eye- - Report As Spam