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You wrap your arms around my waist,
Like I'm the flower of your heart.
It tears at my heart to see you in pain.
When your beautiful face is painted in your sorrow,
A dagger spears through my heart.
When ever you hold me,
A fire blossoms inside.
It's simmering and burning with passion.
The fire runs through my body like a wildfire.
It burns through my whole body with such beauty and grace.
It's too powerful to hold in one's soul and body.
I unleash the twisting sensation,
For the burning should be shared.
Such a feeling should not be kept to one's self.
Such a fire that burns deep inside,
Should be shared with someone you adore.
Someone that deserves this loving.
My lips are pressed against yours,
The burning flows into you.
I could see fireworks bursting brightly.
I could see stars and the moon shining with a white glow.
The fire is burning now with orange sparks,
It burns in the night sky with our love.
Only when we touch and the fire is shared,
Will this light shine with our hearts.
My arms wrap around your neck,
Pushing me closer to your body.
You are my guardian angel,
I will hold on so we can fly to the glowing stars.
I will hold on forever,
Until death do us part...
- Title: Until Death Do Us Part...
- Artist: undoings
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Description:
I was heartbroken [ironic since this poem is about being in love]. I was listening to Adore by Paramore
I didn't do a poem about sad s**t like last time cause people kept saying "Oh this poem is emo".
Go ******** off and piss off some other people with your damn labels.
It is really mushy gushy, I know.
This was hard-ish to write cause as most friends know, I'm not very er....sweet.
This is only my second poem so go a lil easy on me, just a lil.
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- Date: 12/23/2008
- Tags: until death part burning love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- libro_amante - 12/24/2008
- WOW!! 5/5 to me it's like twilight. GOOD JOB !!
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- Sugarchild12 - 12/23/2008
- that was lovly!!you dont have to freak out on the spelling iv seen worst, were almost all the words were spelt wrong.and im no good speller myself.
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- ii ShortCake - 12/23/2008
- i luv it <3 ;]
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- undoings - 12/23/2008
- NOOOO! I JUST NOTICED I MADE A MISTAKE!!! I WROTE "TOO" INSTEAD OF "TO"!!! NOOOO!! I'M A FAILURE!!
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- evil shadow5 - 12/23/2008
- cool 5/5
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