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Once back then, the sun shined freely,
Nothing was, as cold or steely.
Laughter drew happiness 'round
To everyting from flora to hounds.
The queen brought joy, and naught evil,
Life and death battle and win.
Life flows on, never ceasing,
Till that fatefull day.
Darkness blew, 'round and 'round,
Up and down from sight till it found,
The kingdom resting with such joy,
And sucked away the jewel Zoroy.
And to this day we wish for still,
For joy and life to revive.
Our lives will then, be relit,
And our kingdom shall come back.
For need to find this rainbow hue,
In a time the glow is due,
To save the kingdom from life and death,
She'll battle all, till life's last breath.
So when the kingdom does redo,
And life and joy arrive,
We'll all wait faithfully,
And battle while we strive.
For life and joy never cease,
Their hope is still alive.
We'll never live with this curse,
For battle will revive.
And when that faith-filled maiden shows,
The kingdom will reglow.
So till that day our hope will light,
Our eternal soul inside.
- by Sailor_Neptune_Michiru16 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/03/2009 |
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- Title: Meirenna Prayer
- Artist: Sailor_Neptune_Michiru16
- Description: This poem is part of a story on how a special girl saved her kingdom. I hope you enjoy it!!! Somethings you may not understand, so my story will make it all clear. Thank you!
- Date: 01/03/2009
- Tags: meirenna prayer
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Sailor_Neptune_Michiru16 - 01/04/2009
- You think my work is good? Great! I'm only 10 you know.
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- NakedJack - 01/04/2009
- Its really good, but a thesaurus would really make it shine. Also, its a bit repetitive. I'm gonna give it a 5. 1-3 below what I'd consider good from what I've read on gaia. 4 is average and 5 is above average.
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- pooh_spida79 - 01/03/2009
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nice poem! this is jjust a suggestion, i think it would sound better if the line was
She'll battle all, till life's last breath. - Report As Spam
- Sailor_Neptune_Michiru16 - 01/03/2009
- I hope you all will enjoy my poetry! I love to write and hope to be a writer someday. It is my best subject. I thank you all!
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