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I sneak in through the door,
silent and slick.
The only sound is that of the clock
tick tock tick
I slide by the cameras,
slit the gaurds throat,
tiptoe up the stairs,
and see the daimond coat.
I cut through the glass case,
I grab the prize.
All the way back whispering,
"It's mine, Mine, MINE!"
I then hear the sirens,
and I run for the door.
Above all the noise I hear,
more footsteps on the floor.
I trip,
then I fall.
I hear them too,
feet pounding through the hall!
I pick myself up,
and sprint to the door.
I begin thinking
that I may just get out, more, and more.
I burst outside
and sprint down the street.
I don the daimond coat
to protect from cold of the snowy sheet.
I turn down the road,
smell the sweet scent of buns,
and know in my head,
that the deed, has been done.
- Title: Thief
- Artist: kia1996
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Description:
about a theif stealing a coat with daimonds on it
plz comment on what u liked/disliked so I know what to work on
thnx - Date: 01/27/2010
- Tags: thief
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Cyntryli - 01/27/2010
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I like it. The third stanza was hilarious!
"I cut through the glass case
I grab the prize.
All the way back whispering,
'It's mine, Mine, MINE!"
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