hurts

• Artist: xxXXdare_meXXxx
• Description: it a kick a** poem lol
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: hurts

my heart is still brocken my old wonds have been torn open do not cry for me ur tears are useless but can u see my sadness my sad eyes my sad cry my sad feeling my sad heart my thought are back and there no going back what wrong whit me im hateing everthing i feel no more hold me close as i pray take the rest of the world away do they know what wrong whit me just take my heart take it no i can not do this by myself i need help

Comments

[L3v1-san]

this is horrible you need to learn how to spell stupid

[Atheshya]

This doesn't even deserve one star but unfortunately I cannot give any less.

[Toastbusters]

This isn't quite as good as your last epic.
Or perhaps the one following it, I'm not too sure of the chronology.
But yes, there's no ironic layers, or brilliant nuance at play, not like the first.
Your first piece reeked of semi-retarded, functionally pathetic genius - but this, this is genuinely bad.
Lame.

[TheKnightBlades]

nice poem u get a 3