Let the Road Carry You

• Artist: C0FFIN
• Description: I wrote it during an AP test after I'd finished and was contemplating which college I would attend.
  You most likely will notice three things about my work: that I try to rhyme far more than is needed; I use an odd rhyme scheme and meter; and three that I use odd punctuation . The reason for this is that it is my style. I have even written a manifesto on my style of poetry which takes to interesting forms which should you look for me every week you shall undoubtedly get to know.
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: college future beatles river road

There or here, here or there.
To choose one seems so unfair
to stay I wonder if I'll dare?

To leave them all behind
or go on down the line
out there, somewhere
maybe one you I can call mine
still friends are hard to come by.

Thus my misgivings abound
a choice to great for me to call
still they must hound
as to which collegial hall.

Let it be;
To enjoy this time is key,
later I will pay the fee.

The river ever rushes on.
I'll end up where I belong.
It won't be long.

Comments

[Banned Request]

lalala just for gold

[Atheshya]

It's fairly good - it doesn't really have imagery, though. But seeing as it is a good poem (and the rhyming isn't too forced), I'll give it four stars. (1 star - horrible, 2 stars - bad, 3 stars - decent, 4 stars - actually good *gasp*, 5 stars - exceptional)

[Yokoama]

Your work speaks the truth ^-^.