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the wind echoed through the waving
trees, carrying the stench of death
on its wings. a black smoke arose from
the vale below, blotting out the
sun.
he stood, silent as the rock that
surrounded him, watching the war
rage from his platform in the cliff
above the blackened, ash covered
land.
he pulled back the string of his bow,
loading an arrow into it.
he paused. looking around for a
suitable target to hit and
kill.
a gust of air, yet he keeps still,
only his scarf fluttering in
the soft breeze. he sees a target.
he releases his grip on the
cord.
the arrow moves as if carried
by the wind itself, kept aloft
by an invisible force. in
the blink of an eye, it strikes it's
mark.
the sound of a thousand birds rings
out over the battlefield as
a wave of arrows pours down on
the enemy. then there is si-
lence.
the archer stays as still as the
rock encompases him. he stares
down into the gulch below, feel-
ing no pain for his dead oppo-
nents.
he only stares at a single
living target in the valley,
a snow white hare, uninjured by
the hellstorm from the gates of hea-
ven.
he fires a last, single shot from
his bow. it pierces the hare's neck,
leaving a pool of blood from where
the arrow hit the hare's jugu-
lar.
he lowers his bow, looking back
into the clouds above his head.
a drowsyness grips him, but he
remains awake, ever watching
on....
- by liveburial |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/15/2008 |
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- Title: the watcher
- Artist: liveburial
- Description: this is something I thought up on the spot after thinking about the mentality of an archer. the only reason I was doing that is because of my manga, in which the main character is an archer.
- Date: 07/15/2008
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Comments (2 Comments)
- liveburial - 08/03/2009
- forgot to mention - quite a while ago - that this was an experiment in using a style of verse that has 4 lines 8 syllables long, followed by a single syllable.
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- xHeidixSurferx - 01/25/2009
- this is really good! I could picture it all...
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