Realizing the truth

• Artist: Maichimonji
• Description: tis a poem I wrote one night many weeks ago, please vote fairly, and feedback would be nice
• Date: 07/15/2008
• Tags: poem hatred trust kane darkness

I sit here in the darkness staring at the ceiling.
Wondering what its like to be hated,
with this pencil and paper I'll make you sedated-

To live with people who hate you, is like going through hell too
Waiting, Watching other people die, wishing hoping, I could be that guy

Then I pull out a blade, put it on my wrist, I get ready for the cut, But then THEY all walk in and call me a NUT!

Living like this I'd rather be dead, so much Hatred that it hurts my head
Theres a moment of happiness a moment of glee, but everything else is severe Misery

Now back in the Darkness I see with my heart, "Trust no one, but yourself" and get ready to part

This happiness is speial it keeps me alive, But soon I will learn the severing of ties--
Soon I'll learn that none of it ever lasts, and that one day we will all colapse

It is the Quest for Happiness, that brings us Misery

Comments

[iwillbeatharvestmoon64]

this is very deep 5/5

[Maichimonji]

thank Viral, I guess

[Viral Agent]

You have so much talent, but emo poetry is so common, I almost skipped it.
Please, I understand that you might have written this to get over bad stuff, but if you used your talent to write something less overrated, you would probably be more celebrated

[xxlostxinxthexthoughtxx]

Like this is the bomb.. I love it.. <3 You ish a very good writer, no doubts about it. ^-^

[Brigid FTW]

this was the one i read that made me so emo i cried. O.O

[Maichimonji]

thank you

[Yukilunny598]

sounds very familure...
you did good