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Open my eyes,
Sun shines bright,
New day awoken,
And begun has the fight.
Keep up the pace,
I'm falling behind,
It's a long way ahead,
And I'm out of my mind.
Gotta run away,
As fast as I can,
Gotta get away,
Get away from the man.
He haunts in the bright of day,
He haunts in the dark of night,
He can't be erased,
And with him I must fight.
I can't survive,
Not on my own,
I don't wanna tell,
But it has to be known.
I need someone's help,
I need someone here,
But I can't let it out,
And it can't disappear.
When I ask for help,
They leave me here for dead,
No one cares to help,
Instead the rumor spread.
No one here to help,
Not to help me in my fight,
There is naught but myself,
And I'm holding on tight.
Who will you believe,
When the girl bursts into tears,
Who will you believe,
When you see all of her fears.
Who will take the blame,
When he decides to lie,
Who will win the game,
when the truth remains to die.
Ignore just what it did to me,
And I will not forget,
The lies you tell to save yourself,
It's not over yet.
It is not a lie,
It was not a dream,
Can't you hear me cry,
Can't you hear me scream.
Don't you trust on him,
Don't believe his lies,
Know his tears ain't real,
It's all just a disguise.
I swear I will survive,
I will make it through,
To me you're still that man,
The man I thought I knew.
Closing my eyes,
The sun has set,
The fight is never over,
But the day is finally dead.
- Title: The Struggle Within
- Artist: Konimaka
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Description:
This is a little hate thingy I wrote back when things weren't going all too well. Now I just kinda like the way I put it into a poem. It's not that good, but it's better than anything I wrote before, so just for that I'm a bit proud of myself.
Constructive criticism on my way of writing welcome. - Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: strugglewithinhatefear
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Lexilynn533 - 12/25/2008
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Wow I really like this.
it sounds like something I would write. (:
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