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Martyr
Martyrs will come, and martyrs will go.
Though, struggles fall short while living low.
I am a martyr in a world of gray,
But time will pass, and I’ll have my day!
My conflicts are running madly mundane,
And my breaths of fidelity diagnose me insane.
This slicing, sick, simplicity
Is amounted to monotony.
I admit I’m too meticulous,
But this world is just ridiculous!
No matter that, I’ll stand up tall
And watch fallacious fighters fall.
I’ll sit on my cloud and pictorialize
The ill process of a sweet demise.
I’ll prepare for what I know will change,
When all I know turns new, and strange.
For you have entered now, my dear
To assist me while I interfere.
I’ll lie so still, and apprehend,
And let you teach me how to mend.
You’re elusive, faint, and so obscure.
But that just grants you more allure!
When a martyr loves, a martyr fails,
And end so many tragic tales.
Is my life fictitious? I only dream
That things were more than what they seem.
I love you, but I must let go
Of everything I’ve claimed to know.
A heavy heart and lowly shame
Is all I’ve got left to my name.
Narcotic explosives accompany me.
Neurotic emotions are my enemy.
The death of a martyr lies closely ahead,
This world is hopeless, and this city is dead!
- by The God Bot 4000 |
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- | Submitted on 07/17/2008 |
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- Artist: The God Bot 4000
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I've never entered any sort of contest with my poetry, but I've been told I'm really good at writing.
Constructive criticism could do me good, so don't be afraid to speak your mind. - Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- A7X cl0wn - 03/14/2009
- once again i have said before i dispise normale poetry u need to try some other stuff like me
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- GlitterSpritzer - 07/17/2008
- Your poetry is very wonderful! I'm always happy to read poems that are deeper than the usual "roses are red, violets are blue" kind of crap. ~5/5 from me!! ^_^
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- Enigma Knight - 07/17/2008
- Well, you're right to be critical to other poems. My word, you are a fantastic poet! No wonder you give such in-depth advice to other poems! I love it. 5 stars.
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- The God Bot 4000 - 07/17/2008
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Thank you kindly. =] ♥♥♥
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- darkgothgirl17 - 07/17/2008
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nice poem really deep i give it a 9
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- xXLuthien-CulnamoXx - 07/17/2008
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Woah this is really good. Really don't know what to say to make this poem any better. It's quite deep O.O
5/5 biggrin - Report As Spam