Misery is Mine

• Artist: Blondy645
• Description: This poem can mean different things depending on the person. For some, it can mean death, for others, it can simply mean depression or pain...emotional or physical. I hope you can relate to this poem and that you enjoy it!
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: dark death scary pain

"The Death Poem"

Tears are shedding
Droplets falling
Teeth are chattering
Hearts are stopping

Eyes are swelling
Darkness approaching
Fingers trembling
People choking

Legs are cramping
Bodies shaking
Knees collapsing
Bones are breaking

Hope is fading
Light is leaving
Darkness surrounding
Death is nearing

Voices calling
People yelling
Souls are screaming
The end is leering

Comments

[atsyrk]

verry nice. 5/5 biggrin

[reapersuns manfriend]

I'm not suprised at all that your poem has gotten as many comments as it has. It's simple, but very good. Well done. 3nodding

[Aislene Drossel]

My kind of poem...Very nice. You're right, this can mean different things depending on the person. I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more comments.

[faux_fur_rabbit]

i like it

[Blondy645]

Any comments?