Footsteps

• Artist: Nightmare Zodiac
• Description: This is about a girl who commits suicide, then, when she is in the next world she realizes she was better off alive. This isn't about me or anyone I know, it's just that I feel sorry for the families of people who commit suicide and this poem is for these thinking about it, to try and convince them not to. If I could save 1 person by the means of this poem, I'd be really happy.
  
  Thanks for looking
• Date: 07/18/2008
• Tags: footsteps suicide jizzyjamez regret love

I'm barefoot and walking along a dirt road
My hands are red raw, from carrying this load

My mother is crying and father is yelling
I will never return, but there is no way of telling

My sister is in the garden and brothers by her side
Memories of me are swept up by the tide

Lost in the darkness, coming over me
If I could go back, how happy I'd be

But the windows are closed and the doors are locked
The shadows around me are having me mocked

The pain my legs, running down to my feet
The blood on my hands and on my bed sheet

My mistakes have cost me a family who cared
So now my story is to be told, to be shared

Comments

[forget-me-not fields]

wow, this is really good

[Nightmare Zodiac]

thanks

[The_Schizophrenic_Psycho]

5/5

[Metal dudemaster]

nice 1

[Kitteah]

Wow, this is pretty good. I like the intention of it.