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With it's fire breath.
It can singe your soul right down.
To the bitter end.
- by BelieverOfMars |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/20/2008 |
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- Title: Dragon Haiku
- Artist: BelieverOfMars
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Description:
Just a small Haiku about a dragon.
NOTE;; Where I'm from, fire is pronounced fi-re. - Date: 07/20/2008
- Tags: dragon
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Comments (6 Comments)
- UBER_LOOZER - 07/13/2009
- Okiez shut up poem nazis, fire(even in english) is two syllables
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- Ravisher Knight - 07/23/2008
- Yeah, we say fi-er here, too. If I'd written it I would've counted it as 2 syllables as well. biggrin
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- Adrian Sage - 07/22/2008
- I'm not a native english speaker, but I think this is really great!^^
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- BelieverOfMars - 07/21/2008
- Guys...fire is fi-re.
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- iiReina - 07/20/2008
- nice poem!! but is fire 2 or 1 syllable?
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- Amra Rose - 07/20/2008
- haikus are supposed to have five, seven, five sylables in them...dont mean to be a poem nazi but the first stanza is short one sylable...make it firey instead of fire... wink
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