Wouldn't I like to know

• Artist: Arioko
• Description: A poem, kinda, I wrote while I was feeling like I wanted to die, an i needed to get my feelings down on paper, an it turned out rhyming.
• Date: 07/23/2008
• Tags: love reaction know

Wouldn't you like to know when I'm free;
When I'm not.

Wouldn't you like to know if I understand;
If I'd hold your hand.

Know what I'd choose if it was you or the sun;
What I'm thinking when you call me 'hun'.

But the truth is, I want to know what you're thinking.

Yes.

I want to know your reaction if I said that all I can
think about is you.

I want to know you reation if I said that I'd die for
you, right here, right now.

I want to know everything that makes you, you.

What would you say, what would you do if I said I loved
you...

Wouldn't I like to know.

Comments

[Time is on our side]

That's Really Good. :]

[Ushama]

amazing as usual ^-^ i love all da stuff u write, 'specially poems heart

[wizardazure]

omfg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!your poetry is amazing!!!!dark..suicidal and the like!!!reminds me of mine o_oyou are a very talented writer s.o.s^^

[MyfriendsareDohnuts]

aww thats so sweet! I think you should have given more of a story 3 stars.