Lost Soul

• Artist: kirie vega
• Description: I really don't have an elaborate discription for this poe
  I just got the inspiration to write one night! So I did!
  This is not the way I feel! Simply just a poem!
  Enjoy! =)
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: soul lost prayer

The clock is ticking, not a moment to spare.
I wait outside, just to find nothing is even there.
As tears slowly stream down my face,
I still remain here, in a sacred place.
While petals of heaven fall around me,
I say this prayer very softly;
The thing I am longing for will make me whole.
Please, anybody, just let me find my soul.

Comments

[Ryan Russell]

Well, I think it could use a little editing (especially the "nothing is even there" should prob be turned into "nothing there."
That said, I like it! ( :

[BETALOVER_96]

I love it!!!!! I get random ispiration too. Vote my 2 articles of writing please

[-Sparkler Pop-]

I agree, it is sad but not sappy.
I like it! 5 stars!

[kirie vega]

Thank's for the comments!

[Monblanc]

I like it. Kind of sad, but not enough to make you tear; at least not me. Nicely done. 3nodding 5/5

[peacekitten65]

I think that it's great that you just randomly get inspired! xD and I like the poem

[kkkthnksbye]

i give u 5! plz vote me bak