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The fire raging swirling up a storm
Living and breathing
Its only enemy
Is its opposite water
Gallons drench the thirsty land
The fire roars over
Quite its does not
Slowly and steadily
This fire is pushed back
Off the great lands it endangers
And over time
It is smothered to nothing but a small flame
A single flickering flame
Kept tight among a candle
To remind the water
It is waiting
Waiting to be tipped
Released
And allowed to rage
And fight against the water once again.
- by shadow11391 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/21/2008 |
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- Title: Fire and Water
- Artist: shadow11391
- Description: plz comment
- Date: 08/21/2008
- Tags: elements water fire
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Comments (3 Comments)
- rg__crazy kid - 12/26/2008
- cool
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- xXSagieee BabieXx - 12/15/2008
- Wow. Amazing Writing smile
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- Invalid Human - 12/12/2008
- It is a bit confusing, but good work, interesting poem biggrin
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