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that girl over there might seem glad,
but inside shes crying.
she trys to hide it
but she cant deny it.
she goes out every day, in search of life
but instead she finds greed and sorrow.
she thinks every night, that it will be better tommarow.
but instead, its worse and worse
untill she cant take it.
they try and try to escape,
but it swallows her up
and she's
never
heard from
again
- by THaT_OnE_-emo-_KiD_9 |
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- | Submitted on 08/23/2008 |
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- Title: The escape from death
- Artist: THaT_OnE_-emo-_KiD_9
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Description:
my point is that you cant escape death, because its waiting for you around every corner.
this is the first time ive submitted my poems... please leave comments, and rate according to your likeing :D - Date: 08/23/2008
- Tags: saddeathescape
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Comments (2 Comments)
- iiLil_emo_PuppeTii - 12/14/2008
- it was good at the beggining you should leave out " and shes never heard from again" if you dont get what i ean check out some of my poems to see what poems are like.. 3/5. but keep writing!
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- leeah iss tha name - 12/12/2008
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Starts out VERRY good, lovved the beginngin. Its fthe last part that goes "and she's
never
heard from
again"
that kinda makes it a lil less good, othor than that- looooved it :] - Report As Spam
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