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So long, love, farewell to You
Unbinding is sore to do
Never have I felt so flushed
So touched by love, but in your touch
Hope you felt this, little girl
In the middle of my whirl
Now it's time to let you go
Even if I'll miss you so
Believe me - I do believe in You
Let yourself just turn into
Everything You dream to be
Someday your soul will be free
Shall You take my words? Please do.
You recall me if there's doubt in You:
Only you can take your ride -
Unleash the love that lives inside.
- Title: A letter for life
- Artist: bobby c3
- Description: This was another one of mine from a while back (ino there all pretty old ill have some new ones soon =])
- Date: 09/08/2008
- Tags: letter life
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Comments (4 Comments)
- iBrightScales - 09/08/2008
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I like it alot, it's better than anything I've written.
You're very good, and I can't wait to see some of your newer work <3 - Report As Spam
- Pure_Dove - 09/08/2008
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i like it!!
read mine! =D - Report As Spam
- Frosted Cookii3 - 09/08/2008
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Its very good. I think its very well rhymed and verse, and I agree. Final couplet IS full of win ^^
Rate mine too maybe? - Report As Spam
- Krailis-kuchu - 09/08/2008
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Final couplet is full of win.
Very nice dude.
I wants to see more modern works soon. :3 - Report As Spam
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