Perfect Failure

• Artist: Zombified_Milk
• Description: Well, yea, this is my poem, and I guess the meaning is obvious, or not I don't know...I'm the one who wrote it, so it's obvious to me. But, think what you want of it. I guess it could have a bunch of meanings.
  
  And for everyone who thinks poetry has to rhyme...it doesn't, so I just thought I would add that...
• Date: 09/19/2008
• Tags: perfect failure

In the reflection of the mirror I see a failure
A person with an idea growing dimmer
With the darkness slowly surrounding
Choking and laughing at me and my tears
I must find a way to leave this place
And make my escape to norm
I think this is a brilliant idea
But you mock it
And my masterpiece
Is now in the trash

Comments

[JanineAJ9]

You're absolutely right. And, this is a fantastic poem! I can totally relate, and it's intensely real! Great all around!

[Kasi Karra]

awwww crying