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When your sad a friend will stay on the phone with you for a very long time listening to you pour out your heart.
While your crying ur eyes out.
when your mad a friend listens and never loughs in the mittle of the story. scream
a friend allways loves. heart
a friend allways forgives and never forgets. wink
and a friend never rolls their eyes when your teling them something. rolleyes
and this is a true friend. exclaim
- by Lime_Green_Gummy_Bear |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/08/2008 |
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- Title: true friends
- Artist: Lime_Green_Gummy_Bear
- Description: this is the kind of friend evry one needs
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: true friends
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Kekyo - 10/10/2008
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I said nothing about being perfect...
Do you see published poems using emotes, for example? No, because the poem itself it suppose to tell the reader what the poet is feeling. Choose the right words, and there should be a tone of voice in your poem when someone's reading it that allows them to identify your feelings.
As for the spelling errors, there's such things as "spell check". The errors, especially "txt talk" like "ur", shows that you didn't put much effort into creating the poem at all. - Report As Spam
- Lime_Green_Gummy_Bear - 10/09/2008
- this is to Kekyo the emotes r for how u feel and i know i didnt spell evry thing rite cause im not perfect.and im sure ur not.cause nobody is.
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- Kekyo - 10/08/2008
- Too many emoticons and way too many spelling errors.
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- sexxii nikky45 - 10/08/2008
- omg i love it that is so true
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- kait x deidei - 10/08/2008
- nice poem and thats true that is how a true friend is. it just depands if you can find one
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- 1_am_1337 - 10/08/2008
- friends or slaves .....you make the decision
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- HollisterChik77 - 10/08/2008
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1st!!
could be longer.... - Report As Spam
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