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Rooms spin, things begin, nothing is ever the same.
Tea time, nursery rhymes, nothing changes it's way.
Everything falls apart, nothings taking the blame.
Nobody knows the way to making things stay the same.
Nothing starts, everything ends, nobody takes the blame.
Nobody believes, everyone knows, nothing is ever done.
Nothing is the beginning that nobody starts, everyone takes the blame.
Nobody fixes everything, everyone fixes nothing, so something has to be done.
So everyone is nothing, and nobody has anything.
That's got to be something.
- Title: Something
- Artist: BlueDyce
- Description: It's expresses the emotions of helplessness, and sorrow.
- Date: 10/08/2008
- Tags: something sorrow helplessness
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- BlueDyce - 11/05/2008
- Something
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- BlueDyce - 10/12/2008
- Something
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- BlueDyce - 10/08/2008
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I meant as possessive it, as in belonging to it.
it's way meaning way belonging to it - Report As Spam
- Hollands - 10/08/2008
- Woahh that's deep wink
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- TitaniumHeartz - 10/08/2008
- woah...deep -tear- xD
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- MustangDragon - 10/08/2008
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"Rooms spin, things begin, nothings ever the same.
Tea time, nursery rhymes, nothing changes it's way."
Should be "nothing's ever..." because "nothing is" is the proper reference.
"it's way." should be "its way", because "its" infers ownership, not a verbal contraction
I suggest you study the infamous ...it / it's ... problem in all its forms.
Otherwise, very nice rhythm, I like the poem. smile - Report As Spam
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