Vampyric Love

• Artist: Jew-bacca
• Description: This is a poem I wrote a couple years ago. I think that it is my best poem as of yet.
• Date: 10/12/2008
• Tags: vampyric love

Hold me close, love,
Under the moon's pallid light,
Kiss me with fervor,
You're mine tonight.

Fold into my arms, dearest,
It won't hurt for long.
Lend your slender throat to me,
I won't do you wrong.

I liken your blood's taste, my precious one,
So pure and sweet.
It's so warm and pulsating with desire,
Like our toxic passion's heat.

We're together now, lovely,
Through all eternity.
Nothing more can keep us apart,
You and I in immortality.

Comments

[Jew-bacca]

Yes. . .

[Fenix Makabe]

*sigh* Dont tempt me with rememmberances of Passions past. blood on my toung, sighs of passion. *bites hand drawing blood* No cant indulge in those thoughts

[Atomic Octopus]

I like it. A tad cliche but better than anything i could've written.

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

Oh my god! Sucking people's blood is considered "love!" Wow! No way! That's not boring, trite, cliche, or in any way overdone at all, and you totally don't some across like an emo whiner!

(PS- you're not hardcore, please stop claiming to live in hell.)
(PPS- it's not good that it reminds people of Twilight.)

[shadow_tail_Kiba]

cool!x3 definitly a reminder of twilight