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Feeling…empty
Seeing…nothing
Hearing…nobody
Don't cry, laugh, shout or cheer
Staring blankly at the wall ahead,
The ground, the air, there‘s nothing there,
Blot it from your memory
Erase all thoughts
Carry on as if nothing’s happened,
Don't be scared any more…
It's not real.
Sitting there alone again,
The tears stream down her face.
Shivering in the cold night air,
Trying to forget the pain.
Its still there, it doesn’t go away
Alone in this cruel world of ours,
The screams that cant be heard.
No one there to help, or notice,
No chance of being disturbed.
Pain, confusion, depression, desperation.
Every emotion ever known,
Eyes red and blurry from all the tears.
Alone in a world, facing all of her fears
Nothing but memories of what the night held
The painful reminder of the Nightmare World.
- Title: Nightmare World
- Artist: senuca
- Description: I entered this in a Poetry competition at school, and won £30 because of it. I was happy that I won, and I made this poem myself, so... I hope it's okay =)
- Date: 10/19/2008
- Tags: nightmare world
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Princess Tarta - 12/19/2008
- This is really good, it sounds like a poem and lyrics!! I am a person who loves music and can tell that it could be made into lyrics.
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- hallow mirror - 10/20/2008
- your writing is very good
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- i_hate_kung_fu_frogs - 10/19/2008
- i really like it!
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- cdwyer-101 - 10/19/2008
- This is so good!! Write more!
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- senuca - 10/19/2008
- Thankies heart <3
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- iBrightScales - 10/19/2008
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I like it, quite a lot actually.
Keep writing, you're very good! - Report As Spam