come to me

• Artist: Blade Aramaku
• Description: try and help all you want this will never change
  (if you thanks its another poem its not its a song:3nod: :3nod:)
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: come

My heart it is no more.
It will never beat anymore.
As time rolls by i sit alone.
Never to feel the warmth of home.

And so i sing come to me.
My great savor come to me.
Break these walls, set me free.
My great savor come to me.

When i open this door.
Watch as peices fall to the floor.
Never to meet as one again.
To stay apart till the end.

And so i sing come to me.
My great savor come to me.
Break these walls, set me free.
My great savor come to me.

If you can explain these problems let me know
As though my life is hard enough
You think your life is tough
You take a day in my shoes
And then tell me pain.

Comments

[Blade Aramaku]

oho im sorry people (thank you katora) this is a song not a poem

[katora097]

For a guy this was good! Most don't even try or are terrible at it. I love it!

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

stare

You need a hobby.

[XxBlood_of_the_TaintedxX]

Amazing I love it

[LuckyAl2389]

I like the poem; however I did find it a little repetitive and it seemed like you were missing of lacking something. 4/5

[Blade Aramaku]

please comment