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Deep in a forest,
By a river of gold,
Lay down like a blanket,
Earth's blanket was cold,
Blowing air silenced,
Trees all in lines,
Waiting for something,
To give them some signs,
They wish for their future,
They ask for a change,
To move to true colors,
For now they're deranged,
The sun scared and hiding,
The moon out in flight,
The bird calls soon calling,
With no birds in sight,
For now Earth is sleeping,
But soon it will wake,
And once all is moving,
This silence will shake.
- by Charmed_heartz |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/26/2008 |
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- Title: Silent Night
- Artist: Charmed_heartz
- Description: night poem to describe silence.
- Date: 10/26/2008
- Tags: silent night poem rhyme
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Comments (3 Comments)
- p01s0n1vy1234 - 04/28/2009
- omg so beautiful. I wish i could write like you
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- Sukuhi - 10/26/2008
- It was fast-paced when I read it aloud and I flowed really well. The metaphors were a bit sketchy, but all in all it was a strong poem. 5/5.
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- SaveTheMannequins - 10/26/2008
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Lovin' the rhyme scheme. This flows pretty well even though the metaphor is a bit chaotic.
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