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The ship set sail as dusk departed
And dawn spilled cleanly
Over billowing seas
The lamenting ocean
Took the sailors abroad
Away from their coast
Away from their land
Away from the life they thought they owned
The waves engulfed them
Yet they stood strong
For nothing could defy them
To those brave men and women
No peril was a threat
Not even the silky cries of the treacherous mer-people
Nor the thousand arms of deadly sea monsters
Could douse their shimmering courage
Many silver moons passed
And the Mirabelle sailed on
Salty water lashing at the hull with deadly teeth
From light until dark
Rust slowly overcame its beautiful tiller
Yet it stood strong until the end
And the last night came
For the weary crew
When they sank beneath the turmoil of waves
Never to see their land again
- by nymph wizard |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: A Journey at Sea
- Artist: nymph wizard
- Description: This is a poem that just kinda came to me . . . of course, i had to edit a few verses, but i think it's pretty good.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: journey ocean
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Comments (5 Comments)
- nymph wizard - 12/16/2008
- yeah the ending is kinda emo and sad but i couldnt find a better one. . . maybe i'll change it
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- best_gala26 - 11/08/2008
- no offense but why is it so emo and sad? other than that it is good
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- nymph wizard - 11/02/2008
- ya, i kinda ended it tragically cuz i was too lazy to find a better ending, lol
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- Uncreativegamer - 11/02/2008
- Wow.. Kinda makes me emotional.. one of my top 3 sad things 1. this 2. nothing 3. Lifeless (mine)
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- Chezekake teh sika - 11/02/2008
- A truly magnificient story... and at the same time sad... I really liked it.
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