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Can you be my someone,
Or can you be my friend?
Can you be my sweetheart
Until the very end?
Can you be my sunshine,
Or can you be my rain?
Can you be my darling?
Can you cure my pain?
Can you be my moonlight,
Or can you be the dark?
Can you be there with me,
Deep inside my heart?
Can you make me happy,
Or can you make me sad?
Can you make me angry,
Or can you make me glad?
Can you be my heroine,
Or can you be my foe?
Can you always be there
Wherever I may go?
- by Devilyne_McBaine |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: Can You...
- Artist: Devilyne_McBaine
- Description: It is a love poem that i wrote for an ex. Comment it please
- Date: 11/03/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- ThisIsMyDeathbed_x - 03/08/2009
- one word : DAWWWWWRRRRR! biggrin 4/5
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- MsGiggle1 - 11/12/2008
- that is very good...i love it
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- frankly frankie17 - 11/08/2008
- thats ssssssssoooooooooo sweet!
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- Dysfunctionelx3 - 11/08/2008
- its very nice made(:
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- truly_dead - 11/06/2008
- its simplicity doesnt show effort...
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- RedWhiteBlack - 11/03/2008
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Well, it's not fantastic, but at least you can keep a rhyme scheme, unlike most of what I see in the arenas that tries to rhyme, but fails.
That being said, it's too simple for my tastes. 3/5 - Report As Spam
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