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A heart can be described in many ways; here are a few I shall name for you.
Strong
Caring
Cold
Stone
Paper
Tender
Broken
Stitched
Mended
Bleeding
Heartless
Big
Kind.
But my heart has no name for it. It has been through many pains, sufferings, and tortures. Yet, as I write this, it shall remain whole and will never die. My heart may not show emotion like others, but deep down it is caring and loving. It just waits for the one person to unlock it and release those bottled feelings. Untill that day, I shall remain the same way. Lying to everybody with a happy face while inside, my heart sadly waits for that one person. Crying, smiling, and pretending like it truly cares.
- by Baron Von Wolfenstein |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/06/2008 |
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- Title: The Beating Heart
- Artist: Baron Von Wolfenstein
- Description: number two in my writings. i like creative criticism, no matter how harsh. please, comment me so i can fix anything in later works.
- Date: 11/06/2008
- Tags: beating heart
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- Baron Von Wolfenstein - 11/21/2008
- Any critics? Please, I need creative criticism here.
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- FaLlInG oUt Of ToDaY - 11/14/2008
- thats so true u just described everything that i think if u want pm me u sound really kewl and i have no critism cause i like it that much
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